14+Jamela+Sample

=I love my hair=

My hair is natural My hair is curly I love my hair

It's my hair It's my thing I love my hair

My hair is special My hair is long I love my hair

It's a curly madness It's fun in the water I love my hair

=What tools did I use= One of the tools that I used was repatition. I used repatition because it makes my poem sound unique and because it sounds cool. Then I used line breaks in my writing. I used line breaks because you need to take a breath in this poem. I also used rhythm in my poem. The rhythm that I used was 4 5 4. I used this rhythm because repation has you use the same phase or word lots of times and it makes a good beat. Those are the tools I used.

=When I bust my lip= I was at home on my playground me and my cousins were playing a game. It just rain and my mom was gone the object of the game was you go up the slide then down the slide to the brick wall then I slipped on a rock and my mouth hit the bricks I busted my lip and 3 of my teeth fell out. I was 6 I started to cry my dad came to me and picked my up and took my to the bathroom. When I looked at myself I screamed likeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.I said so my dad took me right to the Emergany room. My mom came just in time. We had to go to hoptial. I had to go to a room so I could get a shot in my lip so when they sow my lip I won't feel it. The shot hurt a lot ah ah ahhhhhhhhh mu mu mommy! I said but my dad helded on to my hand tight. It was over but I was still in pain. I we back into the room that the nurse checked me in. They sowed my lip and I went back home. I had to stay at home for 3 days then I went back to school Hi guys look at my lip. At home I had to use a straw to drink but that is a another story.